So I really like this one, but it needs one more page, detailing who made the sign on the door and set the fire, and why.
Also, running after a monster yelling "NI!" at the top of your lungs is... well you get how that could feel a little odd.
However, I love the story in all it's simplicity, and playing through it had some really good human moments, where the PC:s get room to actually start giving a damn about what happens to NPCs. The missing or overlooked parts can be easily fixed.
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